Revision Reflection

Revision Reflection

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Please pick up your reviewed Essay 2: Rough Draft from the Assignment Dropbox from Week 7. I will have them all reviewed by Wednesday, but you should keep an eye on your email and the dropbox for notifications in case I have them completed earlier, which is my goal.

Complete these steps:

Look at my comments and the places where I have written in the lines of your essay. Create a revision chart where you categorize your comments in one of two ways: lower-order vs. higher-order concerns. It might look something like this:

Paragraph	Higher-order concerns	Lower-order concerns
1	Introduction: I did not include my central argument.	I have three grammatical issues: capitalization
2	Paragraph 2: My claim didn’t match my evidence.	Paragraph 2: I have two run-on sentences that I need to fix.Introduction: I did not include my central argument
4	Paragraph 4: I did not analyze my evidence	Paragraph 4: I messed up my citation parenthesis – I need to put the quotation marks around the article title (“Access and Affordability”)

After you create your chart and complete revising your essay, you will write a letter to me: Dear Dr. K. In it, you will
1. Give me an overview of what you prioritized in your revision;
2. explain what worked well for you;
3. explain what you are still struggling with and that you need a little more help with; and
4. copy and paste your chart into the bottom of your paper.

Please save your file as: Lastname_Revision_Reflection.docx and submit with your Lasntame_E2_FD.docx in the Assignment Dropbox

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