ENG 200 UP Wk 3 Corporal Punishment Affection to Child Growth Discussion Paper APA FORMAT. Within 500-700 words. Ensure the paper reflects your best effort

ENG 200 UP Wk 3 Corporal Punishment Affection to Child Growth Discussion Paper APA FORMAT. Within 500-700 words. Ensure the paper reflects your best effort at clean copy in terms of spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I’ve downloaded a rough draft to show what’s my main points down belo 1
Hi Uneka –Thank you for your efforts on the Week 3 Argument Rough Draft. I hope you will review
this feedback and the instructions for the assignment and revise as suggested to improve your
score on this assignment. I have attached the Scoring Rubric at the end, which identifies all the
criteria of the instructions. A little X identifies a surface error such as fragments or spelling, and
I’ve referred you to the Punctuation Pattern Sheet. Thank you. . . . Annie
Farm Animals Deserve Rights
Uneka Hawkins
ENG_200_53472264
02.03.2020
Dr, Annie T. Oakes
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Animals Deserve Rights
APA does not allow personal pronouns like “I”, “me”, or “you” because these
detract from the academic and objective nature of the writing.
Indent ½” Humans
wake up and a X breathe a day at a time, so do animals. I’m not talking rights
to vote, or rights to driver licenses. I’m talking about rights to live, and rights to be treated equal.
Animals should be able to pick what’s their purpose on earth. It may not be logic, but killing
them for our well-being isn’t right. They see, hear, they have a mind of their own. Why slaughter
them? Why cant they have protection laws? Rather than generating research questions, here is
where you need to placed a focused research thesis statement. What is the focus of the paper that
you can cover in 3 pages?
Farm Animals
This is not a speech – you are writing a research paper, so this verbiage does not sem to
work well here:
With the show of hands, who would enjoy being caught, born or even
rescued to be enslaved for humans across the world.
https://learning.blogs.nytimes.com/2015/02/18/should-farm-animals-have-more-legalprotections/ This does not explain the content and is not cited in APA format. shows in 1966
where The Welfare Act was enacted to protect certain animals excluding farm animals; chickens,
pigs, sheep and cattle. In the article Nicholas Kristof, mentioned that those Those animals in
particular was X were enslaved by being overly impregnated to produce more food and milk at a
time (Kristof, year)