CF2 New York University Iago and Satan as Tempters & Careful Plotting HW First of all, rewrite the part of Satan cause we used the wrong book. Professor sa

CF2 New York University Iago and Satan as Tempters & Careful Plotting HW First of all, rewrite the part of Satan cause we used the wrong book. Professor said we should not use the Satan in the bible, but use the paradise lost. Also, I listed a new outline. The previous ones was vague. Prof looking for more detailed work. So, I use quote+contextual analysis. I also rewrite the essay in my own understanding. Please edit the new draft with some old draft materials, also rewrite a more cleared part of how Iago and Satan are naturally evil and enjoy their evil revenge with quotes and analysis. Lastly, need a new conclusion to cover the points and thesis. also?sentence structure and transition need to be better?need better vocabulary overall.