An Evaluation of the I Phone

I would like my paper to be on Iphone. You can speak in first person (I)
I have attach an example essay
The goal in evaluating something is not only to express your viewpoint, but also to persuade others to accept your judgment.
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-Title… An Evaluation of the I Phone
I first was with Metro PCS and switch over to Iphone 7 years ago and never came back. You can use Iphone for personal or business. My mother owns a beauty salon and I was able to do her online order off my lap top. Having a smart phone make it easier for school for those that don’t have a laptop. Not switching to Android for the life of me.
****Features ****
Iphone has *Apple Music no other carrier has.
*Icloud to secure your personal belongings like photos, messages and personal emails
*I Message, air drop,
*Video speed faster Clearer photos
**Emojis are personal and modern
*Find your iphone and air pods – feature to help find your phone if lost, it show air phone products.
*Air phone holds a different statue as a individual people assume you are wealthy because you have apple products.

Choosing a Topic
Good topic selection is crucial to success on the Evaluation Essay, and following these guidelines will help ensure you have an acceptable subject to evaluate.
• Remember you are not evaluating a category of things: you are evaluating a specific individual item from within that category. For example, in our sample student paper, the writer does not evaluate “smartphones” (a category of things) but instead evaluates the Motorola Droid (a specific individual subject from within that category).
• Evaluate only one subject (for example, do not do a compare-and-contrast of two subjects)
• You must pick a subject you are already familiar with and have access to. You will need to study the subject, so that you do not have to come up with all your evidence from memory.
• The evaluation should be written based on your own knowledge, ideas, experiences, and opinions.
• You may not consult sources or borrow information, with the following exception:
• You can consult the subject’s own information about itself. Examples:
✓ Looking at an owner’s manual for technical details
✓ Looking at CSN’s catalog for a specific course’s official description, number of credits, etc.
✓ Reviewing a movie or album for specific details to use as evidence, including things like artists’ or producers’ names
• Pick a subject with typical agreed upon criteria, so that your evaluation does not simply come down to personal preference (for example, everyone wants a fast smartphone, but color is entirely personal preference).
• Do not pick an overly personal subject (for example, do not evaluate your romantic partner: no one else cares—and that’s kinda weird, anyway). ☺