agency : the IMF (how the IMF affected Asian continent)

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Here is your draft paper with editing suggestions from me written in the text of the draft. You have done a good job identifying some key details about the IMF intervention in Asia. However, much if this is still very difficult to follow and it will need editing to remove grammatical errors. The term “agency” is used here to mean public institution, which is fine, but the group is focusing on “agency” as it is applied to mean purposeful action. Throughout the paper, your writing is often very hard to follow, so please work to fix the errors that I have flagged. In several sections, your writing is too vague. To write a good analysis, you will to be more specific and clear in identifying the key points and arguments in the readings that you discuss, and in assessing them.
this is my professor’s comment for my draft, This is analysistic essay. The main topic is agency. How the agency affected society and human rights, and I chose the IMF. IMF affected the Aisan continent during the Aisan financial crisis.

In addition, i focused on Thailand and South Korea because these two countries was influenced by the IMF.

I just want to revise my draft.Discipline: global studies