: How did the governments tackle the drought with regards to the UN sustainable goal and its social and economic impact?

Group: A4 

Title: How did the governments tackle the drought with regards to the UN sustainable goal and its social and economic impact? 

Comments on General Layout/structure:

• Your title needs to be developed a lot more. Be more specific on drought (what type of drought? Caused by what?), And are you talking about the social and economic impact of the action towards droughts? Or the impact from the SDG goals? Or the impact of the drought?
• Number your headings.
• Use 1.5 line spacing and justify your text. Use paragraphs to separatepoints in large amounts of text.
  

Comments on contents of report:

• There is no introduction. I would put this after executive summary and include the overview as a sub-heading. You should use your introduction to briefly explain your title and present the direction of your work.
• Your analysis is clear, and the diagram is good. But perhaps be more specific – what information are you really trying to get out of your cases studies, how are you going to do it, and why are you looking for that info i.e. how will it help to inform your conclusions.
• In general, formatting of the research of each case study is quite varied. Make sure they all contain the same parts in the same order and layout.
  • Introduce your case studies with a paragraph of background to give context e.g. geography, scale, location, level of economic development. Images always help.
  • I would call the last paragraph “summary” instead of conclusion.
• For your discussion/analysis try and group into themes rather than case studies. This will help point out the topics relevant to answering your question. As well as this, it will help you to compare the different case studies and their similarities/differences.
• Make sure your conclusion answers your question and is evidenced from your research in the rest of your report i.e. don’t bring up new points.